First Date!!!




The morning began as early as never before
Not to the snoozing alarms neither to the yellings of my mom
But by the curiosity of a day most awaited
Me so proud,First Date in my life.

A festival of teens so loved and longed
Ringing those merry, bells of joy
Scenes of tomorrow so sweet and calm
Sleepless a night,smiles all bright.

Mirror so good, not a second i looked down
Tranparency, for the perfection in me
Fair and round,tall and handsome
Beauty in eyes, envy in town.

Walked down the streets with roses in hand
Greetings of success from men unknown
A land so old yet in new just to remind
It's so special a day,memories that will cherish its way.

Long awaited minutes after, came my princess
Dressed in white,GOD so lovely not a blemish to point
"A droplet on flower" threw a million dollar smile
So innocent a love,even more innocent this time.

Words so wary and whisper in tone
Immature of the experiences, unaccustomed behaviour
Yet made sweeter company the sweetest 
An oath of oneness,to wipe the twains.

Silly talks,college gossips,hardships of meetings
Weird stories not in vain,grining liar not in my name
Moments like heavan never before,day so small
Time a stealer,a chance that comes but once.

Sad a depart,lonley again,very few a minutes 
Anguish of separation but happier more
For the promised days,life so gifted
A day in all to say it aloud "FIRST DATE"

Comments

  1. Amit :-)Wednesday, December 17, 2008

    It was really from heart!!!!sudheer and felt like something is gona b .....magical...in next ..stanza....Hope u continue with such kind of magical words which can make us feel that the reason y we live in this world is to enjoy life !!!!!

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  2. Sudheer D SWednesday, December 17, 2008

    @Amit:
    thanx dude its was so sweet of u being here... i'm honoured by ur words...

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  3. Priyanka TadipatriThursday, December 18, 2008

    Hey there!
    Lovely one. Reminded me of mine first date, though it was altogether another story, sweet one of course! ;-)

    Keep Going!

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  4. Priyanka TadipatriThursday, December 18, 2008

    Hey there!
    Lovely one. Reminded me of my first date, though it was altogether another story; sweet one of course! ;-)

    Keep Going!

    P.S.: Sorry about the repeat. I found something really wrong there!

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  5. Sudheer D SThursday, December 18, 2008

    @priyanka
    thanx a lot!!!

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  6. cooltejusThursday, December 18, 2008

    it was a lovely poem.......i see sudheer goin on a date..hehe:)...i applaud ur imagination buddy.....

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  7. UnknownThursday, December 18, 2008

    wow..1st date..luvly topic 2 rite abt!!!it got me imaginin hw a 1st date wud b lyk ;) n i also lyked d way u described ur princess!

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  8. UnknownThursday, December 18, 2008

    wah....wat a imagination.but hey is it just a imagination or a true story??
    kya baat hai...bacha is growin.."DATE"hmmm....!!!

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  9. Sudheer D SSaturday, December 20, 2008

    @max alias mantosh:
    tere batey bina date kya rey?

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  10. UnknownMonday, December 22, 2008

    it was very xcellent one... really really good., made my mind sooo pleasant...

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  11. AnonymousThursday, January 22, 2009

    the real thoughts that have been found figure in words.its real pleasure to read.its was a straight from heart poem....what every teenager like us thinks....
    you played with words dude...
    a real delight to read.

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  12. NikhilFriday, April 10, 2009

    wow...its must for broken hearts...gonna touch the core and recall their past. its really superb.

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  13. Amit :-)Saturday, April 11, 2009

    Gud Going !! Carry on waiting for d Next to cum !!

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